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page 5: last sentence of "Playing Anders" : "Fun, giggles, and delicious irony aren’t standard adventurer compensation, but then again, Anders is hardly ordinary, is he?" Might be best to remove "is he?" or at least replace it with "isn't he?"
page 7: The stat block for Anders, Justice Vengenace Abomination has an entry in Class Powers called "Fade Armor." It's not mentioned anywhere else, and it looks like he likely gets his armor rating from his "warden battlemage leathers".
page 18: more of a suggestion than an error. Hawke is referred to as "him" in the last paragraph of the "Relationships" section. It might be best to change it to "they" so as not to alienate the Hawkes who are not men.
page 28: Rhys is referred to as a Templar. He is a mage.
page 38: third paragraph of "The Feddics" the Deep Roads is referred to as the "Dark Roads".
page 40: last paragraph of "Playing the Feddics" The sentence "It would likely never come up unless threaten or harm an old merchant and his developmentally divergent son," should probably include a "they" in between unless and threaten.
page 44: the last paragraph of Personality, the first sentence reads "Flemeth is proud of her daughters, but physical and emotional love and foreign to her persona." The last "and" of the sentence should probably be changed to "are."
page 87: the last sentence of the first paragraph, reads " Sten reported to the Arishok that the Warden was the only honorable man he met in Ferelden." "Man" should probably be replaced with "person."