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  • Super Villain Handbook Character Pack: Ontos

    And another one I did for ICONS - http://www.drivethrurpg.com/product/...rs=600_0_0_0_0

    If you pick it up, it's free, I'd really like to hear what you think of it.
    Last edited by sumnerd; 04-29-2015, 01:07 PM.

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    Re: Super Villain Handbook Character Pack: Ontos

    Originally posted by sumnerd View Post
    And another one I did for ICONS - http://www.drivethrurpg.com/product/...ter-Pack-Ontos

    If you pick it up, it's free, I'd really like to hear what you think of it.
    I'm getting a 403 error, chief.

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      Re: Super Villain Handbook Character Pack: Ontos

      Try it now.

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        Re: Super Villain Handbook Character Pack: Ontos

        So, anyone pick this up?

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          Re: Super Villain Handbook Character Pack: Ontos

          I don't do Icons, so I can't comment much on the way of mechanics. Storywise, it's pretty bare. "There was this guy and he was experimented on to give him super strength and now he has 'Roid Rage" seems to be what it boils down to. Providing a bit more of a hook, or an idea of the people in his life, family and other associations, would help flesh him out. Nice artwork.
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            Re: Super Villain Handbook Character Pack: Ontos

            Originally posted by FuzzyBoots View Post
            I don't do Icons, so I can't comment much on the way of mechanics. Storywise, it's pretty bare. "There was this guy and he was experimented on to give him super strength and now he has 'Roid Rage" seems to be what it boils down to. Providing a bit more of a hook, or an idea of the people in his life, family and other associations, would help flesh him out. Nice artwork.
            First off, thanks for the feedback, it's what I'm looking for. If I do more of these in the future, in addition to the stuff you've mentioned, would you want to see things like plot hooks?

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              Re: Super Villain Handbook Character Pack: Ontos

              Originally posted by sumnerd View Post
              First off, thanks for the feedback, it's what I'm looking for. If I do more of these in the future, in addition to the stuff you've mentioned, would you want to see things like plot hooks?
              It's always nice. I liked what Green Ronin did with their Threat Reports and Freedom's Most Wanted where they gave a list of a few possible reasons the villains might be out, and who they might be allied with.
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