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  • Kot the Protector
    started a topic Faces of Thedas Errata Suggestions

    Faces of Thedas Errata Suggestions

    Faces of Thedas is finally here! Help Green Ronin make it as great as it could be!

    page 5: last sentence of "Playing Anders" : "Fun, giggles, and delicious irony aren’t standard adventurer compensation, but then again, Anders is hardly ordinary, is he?" Might be best to remove "is he?" or at least replace it with "isn't he?"

    page 7: The stat block for Anders, Justice Vengenace Abomination has an entry in Class Powers called "Fade Armor." It's not mentioned anywhere else, and it looks like he likely gets his armor rating from his "warden battlemage leathers".

    page 18: more of a suggestion than an error. Hawke is referred to as "him" in the last paragraph of the "Relationships" section. It might be best to change it to "they" so as not to alienate the Hawkes who are not men.

    page 28: Rhys is referred to as a Templar. He is a mage.

    page 38: third paragraph of "The Feddics" the Deep Roads is referred to as the "Dark Roads".

    page 40: last paragraph of "Playing the Feddics" The sentence "It would likely never come up unless threaten or harm an old merchant and his developmentally divergent son," should probably include a "they" in between unless and threaten.

    page 44: the last paragraph of Personality, the first sentence reads "Flemeth is proud of her daughters, but physical and emotional love and foreign to her persona." The last "and" of the sentence should probably be changed to "are."

    page 87: the last sentence of the first paragraph, reads " Sten reported to the Arishok that the Warden was the only honorable man he met in Ferelden." "Man" should probably be replaced with "person."
    Last edited by Kot the Protector; 01-29-2019, 09:42 PM.

  • Icarus
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    Originally posted by Calwyne View Post
    Re: Faces of Thedas Errata Suggestions

    Along the way, they recruited Leliana, Oghren, Shale, Sten, Wynn, and Zevran as well. Pg8

    Not necessarily - all are optional.
    Not a mistake - according to World of Thedas, they all were recruited in canon. (And for some of them the book gives some ideas about their destiny if you decide they weren't recruited.)
    Last edited by Icarus; 06-25-2019, 01:01 PM.

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  • Fildrigar
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    Originally posted by Jerry View Post
    Bull's Chargers' Dalish. She's wearing Light Mail Armour and uses a Bow that is also a staff. Her spells include Levitate, Dispel Magic and Wall of Ice, Light (according to Inquisition- Bull's Birthday, Codex: The Iron Bull and the last few years, DA: Magekiller).

    The Iron Bull is also a Reaver not a Champion and his weapon is the Bull's Edge which is an Axe.

    Why aren't Varric and Tallis in the Book? You made stats for them.
    https://greenronin.com/blog/2019/03/...yvette-really/

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  • Jerry
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    Bull's Chargers' Dalish. She's wearing Light Mail Armour and uses a Bow that is also a staff. Her spells include Levitate, Dispel Magic and Wall of Ice, Light (according to Inquisition- Bull's Birthday, Codex: The Iron Bull and the last few years, DA: Magekiller).

    The Iron Bull is also a Reaver not a Champion and his weapon is the Bull's Edge which is an Axe.

    Why aren't Varric and Tallis in the Book? You made stats for them.

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  • exdemon13
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    Re: Faces of Thedas Errata Suggestions

    Fix Duncan. He is a rogue. Not a warrior. In the book the Calling it is very clear he is a rogue. In origins he even critics your ability to pick pocket. This is totally incorrect. There is no part that is right. Totally wrong. Berserker??? What? No words for how bad this was done wrong and messed up. page 37 (character sheet) Not sure you can fix that with just Errata. The whole build is messed up since it was done as a warrior and not a rogue. Should have probably been a duelist since he usually used two weapons is almost every fight he was in.

    Also Iron Bull is a Reaver not a Champion. page 52 (character sheet)

    And where is Oghren's Berserker Specialization. That was something he taught you in Origins. page 83 (character sheet)

    Also sad not to see Sera as a tempest and seeing that added to the game as a possible specialization. You missed a chance to add some really great stuff to the game and make it more fun.

    Also sad not to see Shale and a background for her like you did Cole. There have been tons of times people want to play a golem.
    Last edited by exdemon13; 02-15-2019, 11:12 PM.

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  • Calwyne
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    Re: Faces of Thedas Errata Suggestions

    Originally posted by PlatinumWarlock View Post
    I think you're not quite accurate here. As the DA Wiki notes (with emphasis mine):



    I mean, Cullen even sides with you in fighting against Meredith. By the end of Act III, he's actively standing against annulment.
    Yup - he fights against meredith - but fights with her until she starts to go obviously crazy from red lyrium at the end. I've added in to the original post that he had misgivings.

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  • Calwyne
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    Re: Faces of Thedas Errata Suggestions

    Originally posted by Kot the Protector View Post
    But please mention page numbers and what section the suggestions would be in!
    I'll head back and edit these comments to be more helpful Update: Done. Will browse for more errors when I have time.
    Last edited by Calwyne; 02-06-2019, 06:13 PM.

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  • Fildrigar
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    Re: Faces of Thedas Errata Suggestions

    Originally posted by Calwyne View Post
    A time frame would help - also understanding what errors you are interested in.
    It is now being printed.

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  • Kot the Protector
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    Re: Faces of Thedas Errata Suggestions

    Things like missing stats, spelling or grammar errors, or simple fixes for lore mishaps (Rhys is definitely a Mage and not a Templar) would likely be everything they could easily fix without having to redo a lot of formatting and layout work.

    Usually the printed version takes a little less than a month to come out!

    But please mention page numbers and what section the suggestions would be in!

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  • Calwyne
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    Re: Faces of Thedas Errata Suggestions

    Originally posted by Kot the Protector View Post
    If you find any errors, log them in this thread with page numbers!

    The printed version (or at least future printings) will likely include these corrections!
    A time frame would help - also understanding what errors you are interested in.

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  • Calwyne
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    Re: Faces of Thedas Errata Suggestions

    Originally posted by Fildrigar View Post
    Folks, we do love getting these corrections, but it would help greatly if you include page numbers.
    I included surrounding text to make them easy to search - is this not sufficient? Do you need page numbers added? How soon do you need this? I am uncertain what definition you are using for errata and which errors you are interested in. For instance Rhys being described as a templar when he was clearly a mage - is this lore quibbles or an error?

    Do you have an editor able to seek out spelling/grammar errors? How in depth are you wanting us to go?
    Last edited by Calwyne; 02-05-2019, 10:16 PM.

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  • Fildrigar
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    Re: Faces of Thedas Errata Suggestions

    Originally posted by Kot the Protector View Post
    If you find any errors, log them in this thread with page numbers!

    The printed version (or at least future printings) will likely include these corrections!
    And hurry, please, it will be printing soon.

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  • Kot the Protector
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    Re: Faces of Thedas Errata Suggestions

    Originally posted by Alurvelve View Post
    It appears that Cole, Sebastian, and Stroud do not have a Willpower score. I have only glanced through the pdf so far and there are numerous other errors. Is there any chance that the printed version of this product will have these corrections?
    If you find any errors, log them in this thread with page numbers!

    The printed version (or at least future printings) will likely include these corrections!

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  • Alurvelve
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    Re: Faces of Thedas Errata Suggestions

    It appears that Cole, Sebastian, and Stroud do not have a Willpower score. I have only glanced through the pdf so far and there are numerous other errors. Is there any chance that the printed version of this product will have these corrections?

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  • Fildrigar
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    Re: Faces of Thedas Errata Suggestions

    Folks, we do love getting these corrections, but it would help greatly if you include page numbers.

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